Harley Creel
2 min readDec 29, 2021

A PREDATOR’S TALE

The local cops had Tom on the front burner by Christmas, 2009.

12/26/09

Ron’s Carmel

Bruce: No, Nancy brought me some pea soup. Not Tom.

5 to 6

Borrowed a bowl and a spoon from Mundaka, the Tapas bar in the courtyard behind Ron’s. The yarn shop lady, Nancy, gave me some won ton soup from Tommy’s Wok, next door.

A waitress, Gabe, the owner, Miller, the chef, and two prep guys, 5 customers, from Mundaka.

6:00

Modelo woman: I’m drinking cokes, my sister is in town. I’m on my good behavior.

Me: Did you find Tortilla Flat? No, I forgot. I’ve got a Place Names of Monterey County. I’ll look it up, bring it in next week.

Not very busy.

7:00

Mundaka is full.

Tom calls: “Don’t close before 11:30.”

Detlief, the pen shop guy: I’m on the way to Big Bear tomorrow.

I told him: Raymond Chandler wrote a number of early stories about Big Bear. Detlief, a German, has never heard of Raymond Chandler.

7:45

The woman who survived a brain tumor, for a pack of Marlboros, and some matches.

8:40

The cable went out.

10:00

Conrad of Iceland, $26 in Scratchers.

10:15

Jimmy: My family’s a mess. Julie is falling apart. Lauri’s a mess. Ben’s ok. My Mom and Dad are screwed up.

Jimmy’s great uncle drove the boat to the Sea of Cortez for Steinbeck and Doc Ricketts.

10:40

Mundaka packed with young people looking for one another, profiling.

11:00

Somebody fell through the window in Nancy’s yarn shop. They’re cleaning it up in the rain.

Five years now today, 240,000 died in the Indonesian tsunami, seems like yesterday.

12/29/21

(To be continued at clernfimmel.wordpress.com, more likely than here.)

Harley Creel
Harley Creel

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